Frank's feedback

Your first paragraph could be a footnote.

The second and last are your strongest paragraphs.

You should have started with the second paragraph. It's the one that hooks the reader in.

Talking to Frank was transformative.

A reminder that others can provide valuable feedback about what I do.

After our meeting, I went ahead and made a few edits to my post1.

Frank's suggestions made it read much better.

  1. Yet Another Call. Nono Martínez Alonso. 

October 4, 2022
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