Your first paragraph could be a footnote.
The second and last are your strongest paragraphs.
You should have started with the second paragraph. It's the one that hooks the reader in.
Talking to Frank was transformative.
A reminder that others can provide valuable feedback about what I do.
After our meeting, I went ahead and made a few edits to my post1.
Frank's suggestions made it read much better.
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